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ANSWER QUESTIONS IN ATTACHMENT1 2 The topic is (The Evolution of Wooden To Steel Ships; The USS Dolphin) The references are below you can add two more Berube, C. (2021). Sea Shepherd: The Evolution of an Eco-Vigilante to Legitimized Maritime Capacity Builder. Biesman-Simons, C. J. (2019). Space, Power, Policy, and the Creation of the “Illegal” Migrant at the United States Boundary with Mexico. Firth, S. (2019). The Military and Security in the Pacific Islands Past and Present. In Guns & Roses: Comparative Civil-Military Relations in the Changing Security Environment (pp. 137-152). Palgrave Macmillan, Singapore. Hanlon, W. W. (2017). Evolving Comparative Advantage in International Shipbuilding During the Transition from Wood to Steel. Mimeo. The paper have to look like the example I uploaded ( IT HAVE TO FOLLOW JUST LIKE THE EXAMPLE OR ELSE I WILL FAIL THIS CLASS) IN THE OUTLINE DOCUMENT ATTACH IS THE INPUTS FROM THE PROFESSOR.1 The Evolution of Wooden to Steel Ships; The USS Dolphin Comment by AmyShirelle Santos: Verify the proper use of semi-colon. GRAMMAR (naval): For first reference always include USS, the ships name, and the hull number; do not include hyphen in the hull number. There is no hyphen in the hull number. On second reference, use only the ship’s name or references as “the ship”. Do not use “the” in front of a ship’s name: “USS San Jose” not “the USS San Jose”. Use “the” before the ship type: “the aircraft carrier USS George H.W. Bush (CVN 77). Do not use ship’s nicknames. Use correct titles. Do not write ship’s name in all caps: “USS San Jose” not “USS SAN JOSE”. U.S. Style Guide, p. 12. Verify format of all titles. REQUIREMENT: Write an 800 to 1,000-word essay on this topic, excluding the title and reference pages. Did not meet minimum or exceeded maximum word count. Headings and in-text citations do not count. Improper capitalization. Please call me. The Evolution of Wooden to Steel Ships; The USS Dolphin Prior to the industrial revolution that took place in the 19th century, the United States military particularly the navy largely used wooden ships for their routine practices. This essay will cover the background of the ship, their evolution, and their significance to military culture. Comment by AmyShirelle Santos: Missing WIIFM STRUCTURE: This WIIFM sentence does not meet SEA 3PC. There is no clear Who, What, and Why identified within the sentence. For example “Senior enlisted leaders (who) should understand three part communications requirements (what) because it is the format used for their assignments (why); SEA Effective Writing Guide p. 12. BACKGROUND Comment by AmyShirelle Santos: This mp is very choppy and does not flow. I’m having a hard time trying to follow your story line. Is this intent to say that during the industrial revolution there was an idea to convert wooden ships into steel. Or that this was the 1st ship in the line of new steel ships? Prior to the industrial revolution that took place in the 19th century, the United States military particularly the navy largely used wooden ships for their routine practices. The USS Dolphin ships is unanimous with the initial attempts to manufacture using steel which was a key game-changer in the ship making industry and the United States navy (Podvia, 2018). The introduction of large-scale manufacturing of steel ships following the industrial revolution, mass production of steel ships transformed the entire navy practices and military strategies. Military professionalism is maintained through traditions which are basic guidelines for all personnel, therefore, it is critical for the military to comprehend the entire evolution of the ships (Holman, 2020). The industrial revolution initially transformed the ship making from wooden to iron and thereafter, steel-plate ships. This paper describes the background and subsequent development of steel-ships from th1 The Value is in the Eye of the Beholder Suzanne Shipdriver Senior Enlisted Academy Class 198 Orange Group Adan Text Box Essay title page can be on the 3rd or 4th line Adan Text Box Page number aligned to the right margin, in the header Adan Line Adan Line Adan Line Adan Text Box Title (Bold) Insert one double space between essay title and author name byline Adan Text Box Senior Enlisted Academy Adan Text Box Class # Color Group 2 The Value is in the Eye of the Beholder A coin of zero monetary value was worth the life of a man. Senior enlisted leaders should know the history behind military challenge coins, because they are the caretakers of military history and tradition. This essay will cover the background of the coin, their evolution, and their importance to military culture. Background There are no official records detailing the history of military challenge coins, but as Emily Baumgaertner (2018) indicated in her article in The New York Times, there is one common tale that most people consider true. That narrative states that during World War I (WWI), a wealthy lieutenant presented his flying unit with solid bronze medallions that he paid to have struck with the squadron’s insignia. At the time, there was no meaning or value to these medallions other than a kind gesture from a wealthy lieutenant. One of those medallions given to a young pilot ended up in a leather pouch, which he wore around his neck from that point forward. After sustaining damage to his aircraft, the young pilot lands behind enemy lines leading to immediate capture and detention by German forces. To deter escape, the German captors stripped the young pilot of all his possessions, with the exception of the leather pouch (Baumgaertner, 2018). The tale goes on to claim that one night during an attack on the Germans, the young pilot escaped and eluded the Germans by acquiring and wearing civilian clothing. He succeeded in making it to an allied French outpost, but found himself facing execution because the French thought him to be a saboteur. To the pilot’s misfortune, that particular outpost had been victim to frequent attempts by saboteurs dressed as civilians hoping to harm the French. Due to lack of proper identification to show allegiance, the French went into execution mode as a means of self- Adan Sticky Note Accepted set by Adan Adan Highlight Adan Highlight Adan Callout Attention Getter Adan Callout Motivation (Who, What, Why) Adan Callout Overview (MP1, MP2, MP3) Adan Callout Title on 1st line, centered in bold Adan Callout MP will serving as heading, centered in bold Adan Underline Adan Underline Adan Underline Adan Underline Adan Highlight Adan Callout Follow APA 7 rules for in-text citations 3 defense (Baumgaertner, 2018). Remembering that he had the stamped medallion bearing the insignia of his squadron, he presented it as proof of his allegiance and