Fluent Essays

Week Four Discussion: Letter to Your Representative This weeks discussion is centered on drafting a letter to your local representative regarding a position on a piece of legislation.  Communicating with elected officials is an important part of public health advocacy.  Written communication to the different branches of government is often used by health and advocacy groups to ensure their perspective is considered in the debate on an issue.  Advocacy groups often engage their member advocates in campaigns to directly communicate to their representatives to assure the community voice is included in the discussions and to influence legislators and regulators.  Constituents’ (you, the residents and voters) input on issues is a valued part of the democratic process and should not be underestimated.  Elected officials often make decisions about voting, and even introducing bills in response to public communication. You are writing a draft letter for your primary post. · Visit  this site   https://www.sos.ca.gov/elections/who-are-my-representatives to find different representatives you may be interested in writing an advocacy letter to. Enter your address (San Diego California) to find your representatives at the Federal, state and local level. Identify which level of government you wish to send a letter to and find that elected officials address. ------------------------------------------ For the letter (see student sample below): · Begin your letter and include the representatives name and legislative title you are writing the letter to: EXAMPLE: The Honorable John Doe, US Congress, 53rd District 123 Elm St San Diego CA 92103 · Include the constituents (your) local address, email address or web form url in the address line (this information can be created and does not have to be your actual information). · Include an introduction and an advocacy issue appeal  · The introduction (~1 paragraph) includes information about your personal experience, education, and interests and must include a statement of your constituency. It also introduces the issue you want to have addressed in one sentence or less. · Constituency means all the people (voters), served by a particular elected official, especially a legislator. In other words, a district that is representative of a specific legislator. For example, I live in Carlsbad, which is the 49th congressional district in California. It is represented by Congressman Darrell Issa · The advocacy appeal (~2 paragraphs) is a statement on behalf of a community asking for the issue to be addressed, thanking or expressing disappointment and/or concern for recent support of an issue. It often includes education about the issue, and is backed up by fact. For this assignment, your appeal should include a proposed solution (not a bill #) you think will address the problem. · Do NOT lobby (your letter may not ask for a specific bill, or a specific way to vote) · The topic of the issue should be discussed. Do not include a bill # or legislation name because that is lobbying. · Please review the advocacy sample letter in your text. This is a perfect example of a way to advocate for a cause without leaning towards lobbying. The example is in Chapter 17, p.335. Read the paragraph prior to the example letter that begins with: There are many ways to advocate on behalf of a public health issue..... For more details about writing letters to elected officials, see the Community Toolbox:  http://ctb.ku.edu/en/table-of-contents/advocacy/direct-action/letters-to-elected-officials/main Other sample letters: · APHA:  these are a bit lengthy, but helps you understand the gist of letters to congress, etc... Carefully review letters that do not include bill number or legislation name. This is a good  example . · American Lung Association : sample letters.  Carefully review letters that do not include bill number or legislation name. This is a good  example . · See the  STUDENT SAMPLE Senator Ben Hueso U.S. Congress, 40thDistrict 303 H Street, Suite 200 Chula Vista, CA 91910   First Name Last Name 819 ***** Avenue, National City, CA 91950 [email protected] Dear Congressman Ben Hueso, My name is First and Last name and I live in National City, which is the 40thcongressional district in California. I am interested in respiratory health and air quality in our district. From working in the medical field near National City, I know that there are many cases of asthma and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease. This could be from a mixture of people driving in the city or the lack of enforcement of emission standards. According to the 2005/2006 fiscal year data, overall asthma hospitalizations rates for the South Region are higher than countywide rates. Children under the age of 17 in National City have higher rates of asthma symptoms than the rest of San Diego. Children asthma hospitalization rates for National City are around 57\% higher than the county average (Health and Environmental Justice, 2018). Many industrial businesses located near single family home had to locate, but not all of them due to them were forced to leave. In 2012, National City listed more than 100 businesses that were violating zoning rules and were forced to clean up or relocate (Heldiz, 2018).  Regulations on air quality need to be stricter and stronger representation needs to be addressed to the Air Pollution Control District Board. Education needs to be provided to people on how to improve air quality in and outside of the home. Ensuring basic things like mandating a carbon monoxide detector and changing air condition filters can improve the air quality at home (Petro, 2019). It is important that residents feel safe where they live. It is also important to ensure the public is aware of the efforts being made to help their community reduce air pollution and to lower future respiratory medical conditions.    References:  Environmental Health Coalition. (2019). October 12: Governor Newsom Signs Assembly Bill 423 to Reform San Diego Air Pollution Control District. Retrieved from https://www.environmentalhealth.org/index.php/en/media-center/press-releases/1315-october-10-governor-newsom-signs-assembly-bill-423-to-reform-san-diego-air-pollution-control-district-2.   Eyler,A.A., Chriqui,J.F., Moreland-Russell, S., & Brownson, R.C. (Eds.). (2016). Prevention, policy, and public health (1st ed.) New York, NY: Oxford University Press ISBN:978-0-19-022465-3   Health and Environmental Justice . (2018). City of National City . Retrieved from http://www.nationalcityca.gov/Home/ShowDocument?id=5019   Petro. (2019). 7 Ways to Improve Indoor Air Quality & Reduce Air Pollution in Your Home. Retrieved from https://www.petro.com/resource-center/improve-indoor-air-quality.