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i need help with anassignment dye by Tues (8/10) Attachment below 1 by Dr. Edward Hale Last updated Feb. 17, 2021 You may complete your Capstone IP3 submission by doing the following things: Your IP3 paper is the exact same paper as your IP1 paper with the following 3 changes: 1. Look in your IP1 gradebook and apply ALL of the recommendations that your instructor suggested for your upcoming IP3 paper. o Re-use your IP1 paper. Edit it to become your IP3 submission. Edit your paper to perfection. o After you have done all of the above, re-title your edited IP1 paper to become your IP3 submission. 2. Add an introductory paragraph. 3. Add a conclusion paragraph. *** POOF – YOU’RE DONE *** ✓ Click here for IP3 Blank Template (with added introduction & conclusion paragraphs) • Click here to review Capstone sequence • Click here to review Capstone instructions from Unit 1 Changes needed for IP3 Research Proposal The only difference between your IP1 paper and your IP3 paper is: o Add an introductory paragraph o Add a conclusion paragraph o Correct all identified errors from IP1 o Everything else remains the same. The #1 error was failing to use the subtitles that you see on the right. The #2 error was the failure to put an annotated bibliography into the paper. IP3 Subtitles: ✓ Introduction [NEW] • Thesis Statement • Research Questions • Hypothesis • Measurement & Analysis • Annotated Bibliography • Ethical Standards ✓ Conclusion [NEW] Unit 3 Submission Help “Editing” Your Capstone Research Proposal https://drive.google.com/uc?id=1swu3mcvHEH7-FQxq-hwkGW3amLa89cTu&export=download https://drive.google.com/file/d/1v6uAvECj1zvmd5kFzBhFu-gj-akH056V/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/17DZoSE3Jaq_2usJ2C0ykVvPyXkfJSGMH/view?usp=sharing 2 Common Mistakes in Submitting Research Proposals The following is a list of the most common mistakes students make in IP3 papers: o Failure to fix mistakes identified by instructor in the IP1 paper before re-submitting it as the IP3 paper o Failure to submit an Annotated Bibliography in a paper (or did it incorrectly) o Hypothesis is not provided (or is incorrectly written). o Measurements & Analysis Section is weak or missing. o Ethical Standards Section discusses the wrong issues. Below is a Quick Tutorial Review of the Above Issues Annotated Bibliography If you successfully provided an annotated bibliography in your IP1 paper, then you may scroll passed this review. Five annotated bibliographies need to be provided in your paper. Below are three sample annotated bibliographies for you to look at. The following a sample annotated bibliography that is properly formatted: 3 Circled in red (below) is a standard APA referenced article: Circled in yellow (below) is a description of the APA referenced article that is circled in red above. It briefly describes what the article is about – and it should be about 3 to 6 sentences long. It is very similar to an abstract: With the above samples, you now know what an annotated bibliography is – and how to format it. You will need 5 annotated bibliographies in your IP3 paper. Below are other common errors that are frequently being made in papers. 4 If the instructor said that you wrote your hypothesis incorrectly, then click here to understand how to write a hypothesis. IP3 Subtitles • Introduction • Thesis Statement • Research Questions ✓ Hypothesis • Measurement & Analysis • Annotated Bibliography • Ethical Standards • Conclusion If the instructor said that your measurements & analysis section needs improvement, then click here to review it. IP3 Subtitles • Introduction • Thesis Statement • Research Questions • Hypothesis ✓ Measurement & Analysis • Annotated Bibliography • Ethical Standards • Conclusion If you are having difficulty understanding exactly what ethical standards are in research, then click here for a review of it. In your paper, you will need to state whether you do (or do not) need IRB approval – and why. IP3 Subtitles • Introduction • Thesis Statement • Research Questions • Hypothesis • Measurement & Analysis • Annotated Bibliography ✓ Ethical Standards • Conclusion Now you know what the most common mistakes are. Make sure you fix any identified mistakes in your IP1 paper – and then add an introductory paragraph and a conclusion paragraph to it – and then resubmit it as your IP3 paper. IP3 Subtitles ✓ Introduction [NEW] • Thesis Statement • Research Questions • Hypothesis • Measurement & Analysis • Annotated Bibliography • Ethical Standards ✓ Conclusion [NEW] https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DclwHInhzOyNWkOcVnJoZlBiFrtf0NhK/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZuEPPZGgIj-O7iLqzpUnQar4bZK5GSd1/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZUt_d_kTBd0C9DraTQUg1g9RMslMHmyZ/view?usp=sharing 5 APA citation: (Hale, 2020) APA reference: Hale, E. (2021). ‘Editing’ Your Capstone Research Proposal. [Unit 3]. Retrieved from https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H8aYQ66iysFXqsAAypgeMlukePlW2FYN/view?usp=s haring Assignment Details Your supervisor informs you that each criminal justice agency in your community has to develop a new crime-fighting strategy for the coming fiscal year that must be based on a crime causation explanation to be presented to the city council for funding your department. Using the library and other available resources, prepare a brief summary of a policy linked to a theory that you would propose. In your response, please address the following: · The purpose of the policy · The theory guiding your policy · Anticipated benefits · Benefits and disadvantages of your policy · The implementation plan When commenting on other students’ posts, consider the following: · Do you agree with the viability of their policy? · Do you see any additional advantages or disadvantages to their policy? Week 3 discussion board Class: Senior capstone Graded ***NOTE: You will re-use and improve upon this exact same paper in IP3 in the following sequence:   https://drive.google.com/file/d/1v6uAvECj1zvmd5kFzBhFu-gj-akH056V/view?usp=sharing This is a good job on identifying a criminal justice topic to study for the remainder of this course. You will use the exact same topic in assignments 3 and 4 (a PowerPoint) and 5. Below are recommendations that should be applied to your IP3 paper.  Here are your next steps: 1. For your Unit 3 paper, correct ALL of the identified errors in the IP1 paper. The errors will be listed in the grade book and/or they will be emailed to you. 2. Add an introductory paragraph and a conclusion paragraph into your IP3 paper. Here is a sneak preview of your IP3 instructions:  https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H8aYQ66iysFXqsAAypgeMlukePlW2FYN/view?usp=sharing 3. When you are finished editing your IP1 paper, then re-upload it as your IP3 paper. Below are administrative recommendations that should be applied to your final IP3 paper. Keep up the good work. TEMPLATE NOT USED: You did not use the IP1 template was provided for you. For your next IP3 assignment, please use the IP3 template that is provided because it will help you to write your paper and it will show you how to set-up SUBTITLES in your paper, which will ensure that you write about all the assigned topics (so you can get full credit for writing about them). Here is the IP3 template for you to use in your Unit 3 assignment: https://drive.google.com/uc?id=1swu3mcvHEH7-FQxq-hwkGW3amLa89cTu&export=download      (2 points) SYNTAX: The following has a weak English syntax:   [The Use of Tasers and the cause of injuries in victim] (title) And: [What are the injuries caused by Taser?] There are other sentence structure issues that wont be pointed out here. If you would like to learn how to improve the syntax in your papers, then please visit this link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rsnM6BLFJJSHN8cV8pG0crPEs_paAhAg/view?usp=sharing   (3.5 points).              PARAGRAPH INDENTING: The beginning sentence of each paragraph isnt indented a full half inch. The beginning sentence of each paragraph should be indented a full half inch. If you place your cursor at the beginning of the first sentence of a paragraph – and then hit the TAB key, it will indent it exactly 1/2 inch for you.  The indents appear to be only about 3 or 4 spaces, instead of a full 1/2 inch. If you would like to see a sample indent, then click on the following link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/16ala2GmHZ6j-PXqQk-_mbJ3UHHl0QLv6/view?usp=sharing  (1/2 point). ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY INDENTING:  The annotated bibliography needs to be formatted or indented in a specific way. It has minor errors. You can see samples at this website: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0QmECZPnLPhNVBxMDRkbHY3Tmc/view?usp=sharing (2 points). The annotated bibliography required at least five sources. Subsequently, there should be at least five references at the end of the paper. There are not. (3 points) ROBUST:  The paper could have provided a more robust presentation of the assigned subject matter.  A robust paper will follow specific instructions that are issued for successful completion of an assignment.  For example, including all of the subtitles that were provided in the template would have helped you to stay on track. (2.5 points). General overview comments:  This project is designed to culminate in the selection of a final topic that is to be explored in assignments IP1, IP3 and IP5 in the near future. In electing a topic that is worthy to be studied, problematic issues in the public sector and/or the private sector should be considered. Your chosen topic is designed to have a thesis statement to identify the problem or the issue that you will study. It subsequently should include a study of a hypothetical situation (and a hypothesis) to determine possible outcomes to proposed theories. There should also be a quantitative or qualitative discussion of “measurements and analysis,” to include applicable resources (also known as an annotated bibliography). Lastly, ethical standards should be reviewed, to include a discussion of Institutional Review Board (IRB) requirements.  CAPSTONE RESEARCH PROPOSAL 2 CAPSTONE RESEARCH PROPOSAL 2 WRITE TITLE OF IP3 PAPER – JUST RE-USE & UPDATE YOUR IP1 PAPER!!! WRITE STUDENT NAME HERE Running head: CAPSTONE RESEARCH PROPOSAL 2 Introduction *NEW* – START WRITING HERE… Thesis Statement [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR] Research Questions [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR] Hypothesis [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR] Measurement and Analysis [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR] Annotated Bibliography [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR] Ethical Standards [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR] Conclusion *NEW* – START WRITING HERE… References [RE-USE YOUR IP1 PAPER & CORRECT MISTAKES IDENTIFIED BY INSTRUCTOR]